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The first intial chapters of my novel. I'm uploading for critique simply because I know there are loopholes in it, and some of it can be confusing.
I'm trying to mix between first and third person. Italicised points that Jim is narrating.
I'm trying to mix between first and third person. Italicised points that Jim is narrating.
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